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God created the entire world including you and me. He loves you so much that he wants to be your father and wants to be your friend.
But all men is sinful. You and I are also sinners. God is so perfect and pure that He cannot be with sins, evil things. That’s why we actually cannot have a deep relationship with God.
But He still loves us so much so He sent His Only son, Jesus, to make him die for cleansing our sin, forgiving us, and making us His children and friends if we receive Jesus Christ. You can receive Jesus Christ by faith, believing in that Jesus died for you and rose from the death. Jesus Christ is the only way to God. You cannot reach God through any others.
You can receive Jesus Christ by personal invitation through prayer.


Heavenly Father,
I thank you so much for this talk, sharing about You and how much You loves me. We confess that I am a sinner who don’t deserve Your love. But You love me so much that you sent your Only son to die for me and you want to be my father and friend. Lord, I believe that Your son, Jesus, died on the Cross for my sin and rose from the death. He is the only way to You, Lord. Please help me to keep the faith in you with power of the Holy Spirit. In Jesus name, Amen.